Hummmm, Candy

taste

lollipop

gumdrop

I need a treat

something sweet

my mouth is bored

it’s missing yours

rock candy

lemon drop

something to suck

to make the boredom stop

a licorice

or chocolate nougat

to swirl with my tongue

just for some fun

my mouth has an urgent need

for a little piece of

candy

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14 thoughts on “Hummmm, Candy

  1. This is brilliant!! It flows so easily and yet the visual you have created (I’m sure there’s a name for poetry like this) is… well… perfect!! Oh… and the words are quite enticing. Something to do in the kitchen, perhaps.

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